http://shiningartifact.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shiningartifact.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mrsronweasley 2011-09-11 11:47 pm (UTC)

she saw that J was grinning at her reaction, her lips still that bright, sexy red

I love this so much. I love that she's getting so much out of it too, you know? That she loves showing herself off for her girl and it's making HER feel great too.

Oh god and then I just got lost for a WHILE, reading Frankie's orgasm (holy shit - so hot how desperate she was) and then Jamia not being able to stop herself from straddling Frankie and just being ALL OVER HER. And jesus, then J is WAITING FOR HER ON THE FLOOR. ON ALL FOURS. HOLY SHIT.

Jamia just tossed her hair back and grinned at Frankie over her shoulder. "Just fucking fuck me, pussy, waited long enough."

LOVE THIS. It is so perfectly HER. I seriously can't get over how you wrote them so exactly how I imagined them. It's just... the best. The fucking BEST.

"You're such a – such an amateur stripper, baby," she wheezed, while Jamia grumbled and groaned beneath her.

LOVE this moment of real life stripper fail. <3<3<3 So fucking adorable.

She broke off when Jamia's fingers slipped against her own and then gripped the dildo, forcing Frankie back so Jamia could slip it inside herself. Slowly, fucking torturously slowly, she finally did, letting out a satisfied kind of hum as it slid home in increments and Frankie waited, not breathing, as Jamia settled into it, wiggling her hips on the final thrust.

*_______* I... maybe just swallowed my tongue. Maybe.

I just. Um. Yeah. Yes. That.

"N-no, wait," Jamia panted. "Want more, just – just keep fucking me, Frankie, please, please."

OH MY GOD, WOMAN. YOU ARE KILLING ME. So ridiculously hot.

"I don't make fucking jokes about it, though," Jamia pointed out with all the dignity of a half-naked chick lying on her parents' floor all fucked-out and still wearing stripper heels.

LOL ILU. Awesome.

"You don't think it's gross when I come all over your face," Frankie noted, pushing herself up and levering to her feet.

"Mmmm, true," Jamia smiled and licked her lips.


I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE THEM. <3333333

Augh. Just. Having you play in this universe was THE BIGGEST TREAT EVER. I want you to write them FOREVER. This was the best present. Thank you SO MUCH. It's insane how amazing and HOT this was. You are the motherfucking BEST, my darling. I love you SO MUCH. <33333333333

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