Wow! This is an amazing display of your versatility and skill, from the humorous (pervy baby, indeed!) to the deeply sad--the ASTB piece, which is just incredible. Beautiful use of language and interweaving of memories and quotes in a way that mirrors the original.

In the Remus piece, I especially love this line: It pulled at him, pulled at him like a cord around his neck; that's a really striking image, and works very effectively to convey Remus's sense that he's strangling in a trap. The piece also expresses the kind of grim determination that must have kept Remus going when his world was destroyed.

Thanks for these gorgeous pieces.