Eeeeeeee! Ray's turtle story! Ray's turtle! Eeeeee!
--excuse me. But seriously, it's the new kidfic. It's like - ow! emotional hook! you got me!

And although I don't understand Gardino/Kowalski, I liked the way the steady, macho narration melts into this
like a young punk who found his way to a room full of cops by mistake. ... ... he'd look kind of dumb with a beard, or at least not as good as he did now. Louis caught his own thought and stoppered it. Looking down, he saw the guy had a wedding ring on.
Very realistic, suckered me in and got me interested within seconds.

And Turnbull - he had been humming a rather jovial tune of his own composing hee hee hee Such a smart, fascinating animal. The connection between him and Constable Fraser was quite stimulating to watch. hehehheheh It's so canon the way you never say a word about him (his sexuality, his mental state) and yet it's all flagged with that vague air of doubt.

And I could totally hear Fraser saying "Everything is in good ha- hands" and that whole speech, and I blushed.

Good fun, mrsron! Thank you!