Heee! Adorable! For your first foray into SGA fic, you've got their voices down really well. I can totally see Rodney freaking out and then John rolling his eyes, but checking anyway.
And, oh Rodney...
“Are you bleeding? Oh my God, what if you have a concussion? How many fingers am I holding up?” Rodney’s hand came up directly under John’s nose and John slapped it away.
“I’m fine, Rodney! I do not have a concussion.”
Rodney huffed and stepped back. “Well, pardon me for worrying about your safety. My mistake. Won’t happen again, I assure you, Colonel.”
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And, oh Rodney...
“Are you bleeding? Oh my God, what if you have a concussion? How many fingers am I holding up?” Rodney’s hand came up directly under John’s nose and John slapped it away.
“I’m fine, Rodney! I do not have a concussion.”
Rodney huffed and stepped back. “Well, pardon me for worrying about your safety. My mistake. Won’t happen again, I assure you, Colonel.”
*hearts*