This is terrific! I loved Ray accidentally outing himself and then Not Talking About It all the way through dinner, until Fraser dropped his own bombshell. It was all great. And it was all totally real and easy to visualize. And then you hit us with the lyrical and beautiful:
Ray’s fingers parted Fraser’s, threaded against them. The counter was slippery under their hands, now one space where two separate ones had been. He closed his eyes and squeezed his hand around Fraser’s, feeling Fraser squeezing back. He wanted to close the remaining space between them, wanted to finally find out what Fraser tasted like, how he would feel against him, but couldn’t move a single inch. In the end, it was Fraser who stepped closer, slid his free hand through Ray’s hair, and brought their mouths together. It wasn’t quite thunder, but Ray thought that he felt something breaking.
God, how perfect is that!
And THEN...it's smokin' hot. Fraser throwing his uniform jacket on the floor is such a telling action. And THENNNN...with the bedroom HOTness...which was Just. Just. Um...I'm not sure NC-17 quite covers it. :)
And I loved Needy!Fraser not being sure if he could stay the night, and Needy!Ray wanting to hide his clothes so he'd have to, and then...
“If- ” Christ Almighty, would he. Would he ever. “Fraser, I would. I do. This is me, letting you. Spend the week here. Spend all-”
Yeah. :) Their voices are spot-on throughout.
And then they lie tangled up in each other all night. Mmmm...lovely beyond words.
I have just LOVED everything of yours I've read, so this isn't a surprise, but it is a total delight.
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Ray’s fingers parted Fraser’s, threaded against them. The counter was slippery under their hands, now one space where two separate ones had been. He closed his eyes and squeezed his hand around Fraser’s, feeling Fraser squeezing back. He wanted to close the remaining space between them, wanted to finally find out what Fraser tasted like, how he would feel against him, but couldn’t move a single inch. In the end, it was Fraser who stepped closer, slid his free hand through Ray’s hair, and brought their mouths together. It wasn’t quite thunder, but Ray thought that he felt something breaking.
God, how perfect is that!
And THEN...it's smokin' hot. Fraser throwing his uniform jacket on the floor is such a telling action. And THENNNN...with the bedroom HOTness...which was Just. Just. Um...I'm not sure NC-17 quite covers it. :)
And I loved Needy!Fraser not being sure if he could stay the night, and Needy!Ray wanting to hide his clothes so he'd have to, and then...
“If- ” Christ Almighty, would he. Would he ever. “Fraser, I would. I do. This is me, letting you. Spend the week here. Spend all-”
Yeah. :) Their voices are spot-on throughout.
And then they lie tangled up in each other all night. Mmmm...lovely beyond words.
I have just LOVED everything of yours I've read, so this isn't a surprise, but it is a total delight.