ext_1602 ([identity profile] flaming-muse.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mrsronweasley 2007-01-05 03:17 pm (UTC)

Oh, this was so excellent. I adore how much we can feel how lonely they both are; your Ray POV is so sharp I can feel his weariness down into my bones. They dance around the subject but can't help but be honest with each other, which just feels so them to me. *happy sigh*

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