mrsronweasley: (iSlash)
mrsronweasley ([personal profile] mrsronweasley) wrote2007-04-25 12:08 pm

Drabble: "ReGenesis", PG-13, D/C

So, hi. The gauntlet had been thrown, and also, I was inspired. So, for [livejournal.com profile] estrella30's Kissing Day, I wrote a "ReGenesis" drabble. It vaguely references the latest episode. Naturally, it's David/Carlos. With thanks to [livejournal.com profile] brooklinegirl for the look-through! ♥

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David was smaller than Carlos and, generally, not as quick. But David was a lot more persuasive when he wanted to be, and the element of surprise was never to be underestimated. So when he dragged Carlos away from the dead birds and into the men’s bathroom, Carlos barely kicked up a fuss. In fact, he looked like he knew just what this was all about. But Carlos never did anticipate the surprises.

David pushed him up against the stall door and it swung behind them. They fell into the stall and it was Carlos who held them up this time, his hands grabbing David by the back of his shoulders and pinning him against the door that swung back into place.

As far as first kisses went, this one was starting out pretty good, David decided, especially after Carlos gave up his eternal and solid control. That was the one thing David never got about Carlos: the iron control that the man had over his impulses was impressive, to say the least, but David never understood the need for it. As far as David was concerned, control was for fucks who couldn’t get a life if they chased it around the house all day long. David certainly never felt he needed it, and he wasn’t about to start now.

Carlos losing control was like a thousand bricks hitting David all at once. They’d danced around this particular scenario for too long to ignore, and now – now they were full-on mamboing. Carlos ground his hips against David’s – another revelation that David had only thought about peripherally before – and breathed heavily against him. Lips and teeth and tongue – all things David had expected, but applied with a force that David had only ever exerted on others. The facial hair was certainly new, and it burned a little, okay, but –

Carlos could kiss. He could really, really kiss – and David was a fan of kissing. He was a fan of kissing as it revolved around sex, never as an end in itself. And yet this was – sex, in itself. Kissing Carlos up against the stall door, pawing at his back and ass, knowing that Bob or Wes or any other male who worked at NorBAC could come in at any moment, felt like sex itself. Sweaty and hard and fast. Good, so fucking – fucking –

"David -" Carlos ground out against David’s mouth. "David, what the hell are you thinking –"

"You’re thinking?" David pulled him back in practically by the ears. "Why?"

Carlos’s short huff of a laugh got lost in David’s mouth. It was stupid, he knew, and dangerous – though at least they weren’t in fucking D.C. with those fucking uptight pricks – but just at that moment, when Carlos dragged his hands through David’s hair, pushed a hard thigh between David’s legs, and sucked in his tongue, David stopped knowing anything at all.

Yeah. Okay. This was different.

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[identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
"You’re thinking?" David pulled him back in practically by the ears. "Why?"

*claps and claps*

BOYFRIENDS.

I LOVE that you wrote this. SERIOUSLY, I am overjoyed. eeeeeeee!

*goes back to writing more kisses*

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, yay, thank you! I can't believe I actually wrote more than, like, a sentence. That's kind of boggling to me. Still!

And they're such boyfriends. Oh, BOYS. *hearts theeeeem*

[identity profile] justbreathe80.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
*flails*

I was just thinking that the world needed more David/Carlos fic, and then I thought, "maybe Liz will write it," and then you did!

YAY.

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
Synchronicity! \o/ That's awesome! Yaaaaaaay, indeed. :D

[identity profile] ubixtiz.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
This is very nice. I like the little bit of dialogue -- it made me grin. Hee. Yay.

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, thank you so much! :D

[identity profile] maryavatar.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
They are such boyfriends. And could they have made it any more obvious that Carlos's ex-wife is David with a vagina?

[identity profile] maryavatar.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
And... y'know... yay fic! I'm so bad at feedback *hangs head*

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, thank you! It's okay. :D

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that is seriously the PERFECT way to describe her. HA! They're just so...yeah. Exactly.
ext_3545: Jon Walker, being adorable! (David & Jill - Whisper by riekchen)

[identity profile] dsudis.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeee! David/Carlos! Making out in the bathroom stall! ♥

I need to catch up and I REALLY need an icon...

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! ♥

You DO. And at least you have A ReGenesis icon. I don't have any! I must fix this. And soon.

[identity profile] lilac-one.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
EEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

I love you so fucking much. Like really a whole hell of a lot.

So amazingly hot and guh and yes.

Also, what [livejournal.com profile] maryavatar said about Carlos's ex.

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww, yay! Thank you, sweetie! I'm so glad you liked this!

And DITTO. Seriously. ♥
rhythmsextion: ([regenesis] kissy kissy)

[personal profile] rhythmsextion 2007-04-26 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. My. GOD. How much do I love you? HOW MUCH??

That was hot as SHIT, Liz. You must write more. This is never ever EVER enough fic for these boys.

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 01:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, YAY! I'm so glad you liked it! *celebrates*

And seriously, there really, really isn't. And they are SUCH AN OTP. OMG. *smooshes them together*
ext_1204: (regenesis)

[identity profile] kylielee1000.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Whee! Thanks so much for this. It totally made my day. I adore Carlos and find him incredibly, incredibly hot. And with that slut, David? Oh, yes.

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, THIS made my day, thank you! Carlos is AMAZING, I have so, so much love for him - and for David. So, together, they're kind of perfect. :D

[identity profile] moosesal.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! Oh, yes. This is ... wow. I love how you've captured Carlos's controlled personality. Really nice. And the end is just gorgeous. Yay for ReGen fic. :)

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, yay! Thank you so much! Carlos = LOVE. I'm so glad you enjoyed this! :)

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_abulafia/ 2007-05-21 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes! ReGenesis fic! I love it! And I love this line:

"You’re thinking?" David pulled him back in practically by the ears. "Why?"

[identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com 2007-05-22 02:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, yay, thank you so much! :D