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mrsronweasley) wrote2004-07-05 06:20 pm
mrsronweasley) wrote2004-07-05 06:20 pm
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A recent post by Minx reminded me of something I was going to write, just to sort of get it down on paper, as it were. I've been thinking a lot about writing lately, and what I do and don't like. This sort of has to do with things that work for me as a reader, as well as someone who dabbles in writing, and hopes to make it her number one way of making a living someday. So, this won't be in any order, it's both on fanfiction and any fiction at all. It's all just my opinion, obviously, so any pet-peeves encountered are my own problem.
For instance, I strongly dislike - STRONGLY dislike - characterization being upstaged by pretty language that is used to show off the author's skill. First of all, in fanfiction, that skill is often not enough. I mean, weaving interesting and pretty phrases and sentences is great - I love it, I love words, I love new and interesting ways of writing. However, when characters all read as cardboard cutouts with no personalities just because the grittiness would get in the way of the pretty, I get frustrated. Especially in fanfiction, in fact. Presumably, we write fanfiction because we like these characters, these situations, these worlds. How can we forget about them, and just write Any Two/Three/Whatever People without using their own personalities? Same goes for plot. I really believe that the characters need to control the plot, not the other way around. This may not go along with certain literary theories, ideas of art, etc, but that's the way I like it. I think about real life, and I apply it to my writing. It doesn't always work, obviously, but it does make writing more interesting and somewhat livelier (at least I hope it does.) If I can see a certain character in a certain situation, I like it. When I can't, it drives me nuts.
Of course - and that's a big 'of course' - in fanfiction, we may all see the characters differently, therefore our ideas of what they would do/are capable of are very different. This is where I just stick to the characterizations I like, obviously. However, there's also the fact that I've seen people talk about how they see certain characters, and then write something that doesn't go along with those ideas at all. Or, like I said, the characters are just blank canvases that never get filled. Or they're boring. Or whatever. I think you see my point by now.
I hate being told, as opposed to being shown. Yes, we've all heard this in our English/other first language classes, and it's so true. I want to BE in the scene, in that character's head, really SEEING the scene through their eyes. I don't want to be told that at a specific moment, they suddenly felt something new. I want to know how it happens, and for what reasons. It IS possible to show all this instead of outlining, I've seen it done, and it was perfect. So many writers tend to just skip the hard part and get to the easy part, and I've done it myself, and gone back to reread and wanted to throw up. I just love being in the scene, I suppose.
As for strictly fanfiction, my pet peeves are pretty well documented in various places. I like canon. I like turning back to canon as an anchor. Canon is why I started with this whole thing in the first place. Canon is where I'll stay (unless it's concerned with a certain Bad Event, in which place, I'll put on my Denial Shoes and dance the monkey). I don't like unbelievable (to me) pairings, I don't like slash for the sake of slash, or het for the sake of het. I want explanations. I need to know why, and I need the 'why' to make sense. (I'm a needy bitch, wow.) The way I see it is, if you want to write certain people together that wouldn't actually be together under any circumstances in canon, you should just suck it up and write original characters, ones that are clean slates and can do whatever they like, including putting on Denial Shoes and dancing the monkey. In other words, Harry really doesn't want Hermione, Neville really isn't going to fuck his toad, and Tonks is a big bad dyke and dykes and poofs don't have sex together. (Ok, that last one may not be quite CANON, but.. but... you know... We don't really know, do we?)
But like I said - these are my perceptions of canon, my preferences, and my beliefs. I've read things that have sucked me into them even with unbelievable pairings because the authors had done such amazing things with showing and explaining and, well, writing in general.
And, yes, I realize that I went through a Snape/Harry phase. I have two words for you: Minx and Cybele. I think I can rest my case.
Randomly, not having anything to do with writing: I hate doing the hard things.
For instance, I strongly dislike - STRONGLY dislike - characterization being upstaged by pretty language that is used to show off the author's skill. First of all, in fanfiction, that skill is often not enough. I mean, weaving interesting and pretty phrases and sentences is great - I love it, I love words, I love new and interesting ways of writing. However, when characters all read as cardboard cutouts with no personalities just because the grittiness would get in the way of the pretty, I get frustrated. Especially in fanfiction, in fact. Presumably, we write fanfiction because we like these characters, these situations, these worlds. How can we forget about them, and just write Any Two/Three/Whatever People without using their own personalities? Same goes for plot. I really believe that the characters need to control the plot, not the other way around. This may not go along with certain literary theories, ideas of art, etc, but that's the way I like it. I think about real life, and I apply it to my writing. It doesn't always work, obviously, but it does make writing more interesting and somewhat livelier (at least I hope it does.) If I can see a certain character in a certain situation, I like it. When I can't, it drives me nuts.
Of course - and that's a big 'of course' - in fanfiction, we may all see the characters differently, therefore our ideas of what they would do/are capable of are very different. This is where I just stick to the characterizations I like, obviously. However, there's also the fact that I've seen people talk about how they see certain characters, and then write something that doesn't go along with those ideas at all. Or, like I said, the characters are just blank canvases that never get filled. Or they're boring. Or whatever. I think you see my point by now.
I hate being told, as opposed to being shown. Yes, we've all heard this in our English/other first language classes, and it's so true. I want to BE in the scene, in that character's head, really SEEING the scene through their eyes. I don't want to be told that at a specific moment, they suddenly felt something new. I want to know how it happens, and for what reasons. It IS possible to show all this instead of outlining, I've seen it done, and it was perfect. So many writers tend to just skip the hard part and get to the easy part, and I've done it myself, and gone back to reread and wanted to throw up. I just love being in the scene, I suppose.
As for strictly fanfiction, my pet peeves are pretty well documented in various places. I like canon. I like turning back to canon as an anchor. Canon is why I started with this whole thing in the first place. Canon is where I'll stay (unless it's concerned with a certain Bad Event, in which place, I'll put on my Denial Shoes and dance the monkey). I don't like unbelievable (to me) pairings, I don't like slash for the sake of slash, or het for the sake of het. I want explanations. I need to know why, and I need the 'why' to make sense. (I'm a needy bitch, wow.) The way I see it is, if you want to write certain people together that wouldn't actually be together under any circumstances in canon, you should just suck it up and write original characters, ones that are clean slates and can do whatever they like, including putting on Denial Shoes and dancing the monkey. In other words, Harry really doesn't want Hermione, Neville really isn't going to fuck his toad, and Tonks is a big bad dyke and dykes and poofs don't have sex together. (Ok, that last one may not be quite CANON, but.. but... you know... We don't really know, do we?)
But like I said - these are my perceptions of canon, my preferences, and my beliefs. I've read things that have sucked me into them even with unbelievable pairings because the authors had done such amazing things with showing and explaining and, well, writing in general.
And, yes, I realize that I went through a Snape/Harry phase. I have two words for you: Minx and Cybele. I think I can rest my case.
Randomly, not having anything to do with writing: I hate doing the hard things.
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Oh, yeah, totally! I hate that everything in action flicks is for the sake of the plot, and not the other way around. It's all so dumbed down that, well, yeah. Bleargh. It's not even enjoyable anymore, because you know exactly what's going to happen, when and how. And it's not that fun when it does.
As long as I know it's going to be AU or that it's going to be a post-Voldemort fic, I can generally forgive deviations in canon.
I used to do that, and, I suppose, I don't mind AUs that much, but...well, actually, no, wait, I do. Heh. I don't know why, but if it doesn't sound believable within canon, I can't take it. Don't. Know. Why. It's weird. Maybe I'm stupidly protective of it? Dunno.
I'll also give the characterizations a lot of leeway as long as they don't do something that monumentally pisses me off. Like characterize Sirius or Ron as total morons or make Snape and every Slytherin in the universe the best thing since sliced bread.
Oooohhh, that's one of my biggest and baddest pet peeves. *g* I see red and steam comes out of my ears when I see that. I just...cannot take it. At ALL. The back button and a rant become my best friends. I am just...so so so protective of those two. Even more so than Remus, because they get more shit than even he does, in terms of characterizations.
those fics do fall flat because then you really have no reason to care if the characters get together or stay together or fuck like rabbits.
Yeah, exactly. It just doesn't work for me. Or, even worse, it makes me laugh in a really bad sort of way. I'm evil like that.
And loose thoughts are good! I like loose thoughts. They're fun.
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Nah. It's a personal pref thing. And heavens knows, I read a lot of stuff that most people wouldn't touch with a ten foot pole. ^-^;; And, I mean, it makes sense. Canon is the basis for the whole fandom. If you're not willing to work within it, why are you writing for it, you know? I can definitely see where you're coming from. And I have to admit that a lot of the AU and Post fics that I like are mostly because they're written by fairly decent authors, who make it work for me most often in spite of then because of, and I'm not adept enough at finding good fic to be too terribly picky.
I am just...so so so protective of those two.
Exactly. I don't really know what it is exactly that they did that pissed fandom off so much, but I can not stand seeing them characterized crappily. For fuck's sake, one is Harry's godfather and the other is his best friend. They care about Harry. Harry cares about them. It's both a character trait and a canon thing. It irritates me that people are so willing to dismiss that and that they think they're justified in flipping it around so that Ron and Sirius are the "bad guys". Makes me want to bitch smack them all into next week. >.< Both because it's crappy writing (if Harry's choice of best friend and his affection in his godfather is proven to be bad judgement due to the actions of either Sirius or Ron in fic, why the hell should we trust that Harry's choice of lover will be founded on any better judgement? He becomes a very untrustworthy character then.) and because it is so contrary to what we see in the books.
Um, and I'm going to stop ranting now. ^-^;;;;
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Amen. Sorry to get religious when I'm not, but.. amen.